Have you ever heard a puppy?
It's yipping and yapping, whining for it's mother
Have you ever felt a puppy?
Soft yet scratchy, radiating heat from the life bubbling inside
Have you ever smelled a puppy?
Traces of dust and leaves, the scent of it's second mother
Have you ever tasted a puppy?
Chewy and tangy, it has a bad after taste
Have you ever seen a puppy?
It's rambunctious and hyper, a small form of the beautiful animal it will become
I think the 'have you ever tasted puppies' part is kind of interesting
ReplyDeleteHey Ryan! You got the analogy and the extra credit point! Good job on your blog and poetry!
ReplyDeleteGood job, Ryan! You solved the second analogy too! Keep up the good work of expanding your vocabulary and collecting those extra credit points! Also, I appreciate the comments that you post on your classmates' poems. They are very insightful as well as helpful!
ReplyDeleteWhat is with the "tasting puppies"
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